LOL damn
This is actually pretty cool lol
Did you make this for a physics project or something? XD
Anyways good work guys I like it. lol
-Dj Karma
LOL damn
This is actually pretty cool lol
Did you make this for a physics project or something? XD
Anyways good work guys I like it. lol
-Dj Karma
Haha thanks man!
Yeah me and my friend did this for a Chemistry project. It was really fun to make!
Actually sounds pretty good
I love the intro
And then the bass roll kinda killed it lol
But yeah it actually sounded not bad
and im voting 5. lol
-Dj Karma
HAHAHA dude i think this is backfiring on me lol...thanks for the honest listen
More on the Trance side rather than Techno.
Agreed with Cylog's comment
The bloop/beep at 1:03 doesn't match the bass so it sounds off
Everything else sounds good.. its almost calm but upbeat at the same time =D
-Dj Karma
Yeah, I think I might chang ethe beep or remove it altogether. It was a last minute change anyway. Oh yeah like PM me an email so I can send that .flp to you.
Not enough bass pumping the song
maybe a harder bass line and a more punchier kick would make it really good.
the vocals sound cool (just a tad repetitive)
other than that its good just need some excitement.. it didn't wanna make me get up and dance or something >.<
-Dj Karma
Ye im kinda bored with this song now heard it too many times but thanks for reviewing ;)
Holy shit
This is epic
Pure epic
This is something I'd hear in like .. a vacation resort commercial or something
Or like a "CURE FOR CANCER CONCERT LET SAVE THE WORLD" or something
its too epic to describe in words.
The melody is very catchy and epic
Good drumming. on tempo most of the times
Ending was a little too abrupt, but then again its still a demo.
Sound quality is a little low.. but still pretty damn good
10/10
5/5
Downloaded
Favorite artist-ed
I WANT TO HEAR THE FINISHED SONG WHEN YOUR DONE!!!! keep me updated or something
KEEP IT UP !!! ROCK ON
-DJ KARMA
Thanks , don't worry i'll be sure to pm you when it's done!
Lawl.
Sounds good, but..
-The bass doesn't always match the melody (like staying on one note for the first 40 seconds)
-The snare could be a little more dynamic
- At 0:45 ish, the bass / kick sound is distorted
-A bit short for even a jumpstyle song.. Maybe 1:30 ish.. Jumpstylers can go about that.
Overall good.
Dj Karma
Hey, thanks for the review I'm going to work on those things and ill repost it.
Hmm.. we may have something here.
Its pretty tight
Good drumming.
But it can use a little more bass to get the song really pumped up. Especially in the beginning and the intro.
Also try changing around the beats a little bit. The rhythm does get a little repetitive after awhile.. even after the short pause at 1:30.
Try adding some Fx into it.. or a real melody, instead of just 3 of the notes played on a bell sampler. Give it a little more musicality. The bass/kick drum sounds weak. Try a different sampler, one with a little more "uumph". The snare sampler can be turned up just a bit more. To really let the tight snare sound out.
Overall pretty good, but could be better.
-Dj Karma
Hey man, thanks a lot for all of the advice! I do admit the beginning is a little empty, but I wanted the drums to stand out. I'm not really sure what other kind of eefects I could add to it though, and as for the bass drum, I actually added a lot of umph to it, there's a bass boost to it, and I wanted the drums to sound more realistic too, rather than sampled. Thank you so much for the review though, I really love all the constructive criticism, it helps a lot in future projects.
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I shall remember the fallen forever.
I like this
A lot
it sounds much like Linken park
Epic.
Thank you :)
Damn. This is good stuff.
I like it.
But It can be improved.
Do you use Fruity Loops 7?
And would you consider letting me remix it?
Thanks.
-Dj Karma
Sure! I would love to hear a remix. Yeah I use FL 7. I agree it could be improved as well, but I lack in the skill department :(. Thanks for the review. Good luck if you choose to remix this :)
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