Good attempt for a 1st time
If its for a 'dance' beat.. you need to keep the beat going especially the kick drum and bass. The sudden stops here and there kind of kills it
It needs more changes.. dynamics and like just.. more. It just repeats the same Euroarp/hithat/kick/ over and over..
the Euroarp and the intro bass-ish effect makes it sound a little 'dark' so i guess it could be like a club-dance-ish kind of song. yeah
well good for your 1st try.
Thanks i appreciate your input, ill keep that in mind the next time i make a dance beat.
let me know when your done with it!!!! can't wait to hear the finished song!!!
This sounds amazing
I don't even know what to say its just so beautiful
You portrayed my song better than I would have done :D good job
where did you get the piano sound??? what synth/program? it sounds so realistic!
and good job this sounds just fantastic.
I'm honored that you used my song :)
The piano sound is titled MIS Stereo piano and was obtained for free from a news post on blackhole12's profile.
I enjoy the quality of it for a free sound (though the file is quite large). To make it sound this real, a lot of work also went into dynamics and tempo. I had to tweak the volume of every individual note in the song to simulate a real pianist playing stronger on the first and third beats, less on the 2nd and 4th, etc. Oh, and adding crescendos and decrescendos obviously. The subtle tempo changes were of paramount importance, as no real pianist plays perfectly on beat like FL Studio. The are natural pauses at the end of phrases and such, which took a bit of effort to emulate.
Your song was very melodic and made a great tune to remix. It was a memorable melody that was simple enough to throw in my own style. :)
I like the flanger and phasing
melody is very addictive
good stuff dude
4.39 / 5.00 (+ 0.019)
a bit repetitive
I think you meant Cyber Angel
Its got potential
I think better samplers (especially the kick/hihat/claps) would make it sound a lot better
Its got the 'sad' tone to it.. but then abruptly changes to a happy tone O.o
Keep the PAD sound going because it adds a better sad atmosphere to the whole theme of a fallen angel type deal
thanks and you saw right through my use of samplers lol,im thinking about making my own samples but im not as experienced yet
ill be ripping some new sounds though or at least work on my transitions
It really got me goin when the bass came in
I can't wait for the 3rd part of the trilogy =)
And I'll be workin on your monochrome remix as soon as I get it
Keep up the good work
Thanks for the review man, sorry I got to the response a little late. Yeah, I'm thinking about how to finish this still. Glad you checked it out and can't wait to hear that remix!
The long awaited =D
I love it
Not much difference from the 1st one however
But I still love it.
And i see people has 0 bombed this =(
I be voting 5 on this :D
Good work man
Thanks for the support Karma - Guess we all gotta deal with the zeros thought, *shrug* I'm heading over to your place to check your tracks out.
Minor keys ftw
Sounds good and fits the theme
Short and sweet.
Can I buy you a drink? ;)
I love what you did with the song and the theme of it
This is absolutely fantastic
I would play this at parties.
and LoL at the woman laughing parts xD
A bit short though =(
I'd like to hear more from you!
Keep up the awesome work
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